The horse that wanted more beauty

by Stephen on October 14, 2008 · 109 comments

in Moral stories

A cosmic god had a horse. The horse was beautiful and also it had many good qualities. But it wanted to be more perfect in every way. It especially wanted to become beauty unparalleled.

One day the horse said to the cosmic god, “0 Lord, you have given me beauty. You have given me other good qualities. I am so grateful to you. But how I wish you could make me more beautiful. I would be extremely, extremely grateful if you could make me more beautiful.”

The cosmic god said, “I am more than ready to make you more beautiful. Tell me in what way you want to be changed.”

The horse said, “It seems to me that I am not well proportioned. My neck is too short. If you can make my neck a little longer, my upper body will be infinitely more beautiful. And if you can make my legs much longer and thinner, then I will look infinitely more beautiful in my lower body.”

The cosmic god said, “Amen!” Then immediately he made a camel appear in place of the horse. The horse was so disheartened that it started to cry, “0 Lord, I wanted to become more beautiful. In what way is this kind of outer form more beautiful?”

The cosmic god said, “This is exactly what you asked for. You have become a camel.”

The horse cried, “Oh no, I do not want to become a camell I wish to remain a horse. As a horse, everybody appreciated my good qualities. Nobody will appreciate me as a camel.”

The cosmic god said, “Never try to achieve or receive more than I have given you. If you want to lead a desire-life, then at every moment you will want more and more. But you have no idea what the outcome will be. If you cry for a longer neck and legs, this is what will happen. Each thing in my creation has its own good qualities. The camel is not as beautiful as you are, but it carries heavy loads and has a tremendous sense of responsibility.

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{ 109 comments… read them below or add one }

1. M@M — February 17, 2009 at 1:26 am

Good story

2. Kanaka Swetha — April 3, 2009 at 9:40 pm

Wonderful story.. loved it.

3. Vasanth — May 4, 2009 at 11:09 pm

Good stories for everyone.

4. Suniel Raj — September 26, 2009 at 3:05 am

The almighty has given enough to every individual on this earth, so never ask him about what you haven’t. Be satisfied with whatever you’ve got.

5. niTin — October 12, 2009 at 7:31 am

Good One!!!

6. Ramya — November 11, 2009 at 4:07 am

Very timely message. People search happiness everywhere but not with in !!!

7. Nikolai — November 23, 2009 at 5:46 am

Many of life’s failures are people who did not realize how close they were to success when they gave up.

8. Sisosi — December 27, 2009 at 6:02 pm

The moral is, don’t take more than you need.

9. Laxmi — February 2, 2010 at 12:55 pm

Love yourself for what you are. Don’t try to make any change.

10. O. K. anil — July 10, 2010 at 3:57 am

Good one. I really like it.

11. soni — July 14, 2010 at 9:58 am

The story is very beautiful. Send many moral stories like this story.

12. Vaishali — July 23, 2010 at 5:21 am

Nice one…….

13. Bella — August 17, 2010 at 9:51 pm

We want more stories like this.

14. N@nu singh — August 25, 2010 at 10:20 am

I loved this story very much

15. Roopa — September 3, 2010 at 9:49 am

A Very nice story i really like it.

16. Fareeha Shams — November 3, 2010 at 7:31 am

Terrific…:)

17. praneeth — November 16, 2010 at 1:39 am

sensible story

18. Mallamma — November 19, 2010 at 1:15 am

Good moral story…

Everything stays within us….. simply we will be wonderid here and there for happiness.

19. Veena — November 19, 2010 at 1:16 am

Nice story

20. Prayas — November 20, 2010 at 4:40 am

This is a very inspiring story and everyone must realize what this story tells us

21. sameer — December 6, 2010 at 11:50 am

never expect more than what you have, it will ruin you

22. jaya — December 16, 2010 at 5:29 am

this story is very nice what we have that enough to be happy don’t go abroad

23. anonymous — December 28, 2010 at 3:48 am

be contented and thankful to our God because whatever image you have today GOD has a perfect plan for you and it is not the measure how to live a perfect life in earth use whatever talents you may have for his glorification.

24. piyush jain — December 30, 2010 at 1:57 am

very impressive story
one should imply it in their real life

25. pratap — January 11, 2011 at 4:39 am

good story

26. vlladimir — January 16, 2011 at 2:49 am

The story tells us that we should be contented on what GOD gave us… Just bear in mind that these things could help us to prosper our life and glorify His Name…..For me I’m very thankful that God give me this tremendous gift which I will treasure and use to uplift myself and uplift his holy name…

27. Nagaraj B.M — January 28, 2011 at 12:11 am

Nice story to everyone and never try to achieve more what god is given to all. or else we definitely fall down.

28. hamad — January 31, 2011 at 12:11 pm

nice one

29. Totem — February 2, 2011 at 9:22 am

EVERYTHING SAID WAS SO TRUE

30. ANARIEL_GABINA — February 9, 2011 at 5:36 am

THIS STORY TELLS US THAT TO BE CONTENTED WITH WHAT YOU HAVE TODAY VERY TOUCHING AND INSPIRING STORY FOR EVERYONE

31. RAJAT — March 8, 2011 at 3:02 pm

A good and inspirational story.

32. TWINKLE DASARI — March 22, 2011 at 12:33 pm

nice story.

33. Shoraya — April 7, 2011 at 7:26 am

we should not ask for more than we need.This is a nice story.

34. sheena — April 19, 2011 at 8:16 am

It is very simple, nice, good sensible story very hopeful.

35. Sunitha — April 22, 2011 at 12:26 pm

Good one.

This story is for all the girls who visit beauty parlors often to change their looks.

Big eyes, sharp nose etc doesn’t make a girl look beautiful.

The best cosmetics are Confidence for eyes and Smile for lips.

36. Bhupendra Adhikari — April 26, 2011 at 5:42 am

God already set the rules for us, don’t try to go beyond what he has given to us. What is yours, you will get indefinitely.

37. STOP — April 30, 2011 at 9:21 am

This Story Makes Me Stop Wishing…. :P

38. Rakesh mishra — May 3, 2011 at 11:54 am

This type of stories really motivate everyones. We must read and tell others.

39. Nav — May 5, 2011 at 6:47 pm

This story really speaks to me. It gives me the reassurance that I am beautiful just the way I am. Very inspiring!

40. satya — May 18, 2011 at 10:04 pm

yes really good

41. unknown — May 29, 2011 at 3:50 am

good story but,it could be MORE LONG!!!

42. Divya Mudiraj — June 16, 2011 at 2:21 am

It is a sweet story. I really liked it. It is an inspirational story for the people who really think that they are not beautiful.

43. nitish Negi — June 19, 2011 at 10:01 am

This is a wonderful piece to all those creatures who forget what they are in the race to achieve what they don’t have. Want is not something bad, but the want to have something else despite already having some marvelous qualities is what we all are characterized, including me. :)

44. edel — June 23, 2011 at 2:26 am

It is a logic story

45. Girygirl — July 11, 2011 at 12:02 pm

This story is for the people who think they are not beautiful.

46. Gzwynnyth — July 12, 2011 at 8:20 am

I like the story very much…. it shows the character of a person who’s not contented of God’s gift to him/her.

47. Naresh — August 9, 2011 at 12:40 am

Nice story………….

48. G P ARYAL — August 26, 2011 at 5:15 am

Good story, whatever you have received from god be satisfied with that & live happily because god always gives us whatever we need looking at our life style

49. Akashdip — August 29, 2011 at 10:12 pm

It is a good moral of the story. I like this story.

50. UMESH — August 29, 2011 at 11:01 pm

I like the story but I feal god always gives us best thing if we are greatful for what we have.

51. Trisha — September 11, 2011 at 6:26 am

I love it

52. Nikhil — September 15, 2011 at 8:18 am

I really have no idea about how many of you come across my comment. But… Did any one ever try thinking that why sometimes in life, we see people dying, we see people who really don’t have nothing at all & some live their life king’s size. What do you have to say about them? Did the rational enough God really create the mankind equal enough and then preached us of no discrimination? We are not born by choice, but born by chance…

53. Hemanth — September 21, 2011 at 5:49 am

Nice one..

54. Jasbir — November 3, 2011 at 12:36 am

I love this story.

55. Fatima — November 4, 2011 at 9:52 am

A very good story for those who are not satisfied with Gods gift to them and to those who under estimate themselves

56. Gandharv — November 26, 2011 at 2:36 am

There is a nice moral in the story. I liked it.

57. Saywhat — December 21, 2011 at 6:14 am

What utter drivel. Fodder for the unthinking masses. If everyone thought this way you wouldn’t be using this website. What an evil horse wanting to better itself.

58. Shriya — January 11, 2012 at 5:27 am

I like it, send more motivational stories by which i learn more……………..and apply in my life.

59. Seerat — January 12, 2012 at 6:24 am

This is the most wonderful story a person can write to explain human nature. I love it totally………..<3<3<3 :) :):)

60. Scarlet — January 18, 2012 at 12:42 am

So nice!…………

61. RAGINI — January 19, 2012 at 2:46 am

Wow it is really nice. This story gave me a lesson, actually all my family members are fair but my color is whitish, I wanted to be as they are, but now I do not want to be fair… I realized now that who I am is what God gave me, that is perfect for me.

62. Theophany — January 22, 2012 at 12:29 am

hahaha you know what please remove this story! only this! because although there is a moral lesson there is no such thing as a cosmic god there is only one god it’s Jesus Christ! not cosmic god!

63. Sheetal — February 7, 2012 at 7:09 am

Lesson it teaches. nice.

64. Syed Suheel — March 4, 2012 at 10:09 am

Contended people are rich in reality….

65. Vaibhavi — March 21, 2012 at 10:04 pm

Very nice. Lovely.

66. Varsha — March 31, 2012 at 3:02 am

As rightly said, every creature on this earth is beautiful & has a purpose for its being.

67. Ter — April 21, 2012 at 8:28 am

There’s a really good lesson in this story.

68. Krunal — April 23, 2012 at 6:27 am

Good One.

69. Mangrak — May 5, 2012 at 6:54 am

Great story

70. Shilpa — May 10, 2012 at 5:46 am

Nice one

71. ROSE — May 10, 2012 at 12:08 pm

Good story. Crazy too…

72. Rose Mary — May 21, 2012 at 9:43 am

Superb

73. SNEHA — June 2, 2012 at 6:22 am

NICE STORY ………..

74. Tilak — June 18, 2012 at 6:23 am

Story really gives self satisfaction…..

75. Deepak — June 27, 2012 at 6:38 am

Happy with what you have don’t aspect which is unrealistic.

76. Sylvia — June 28, 2012 at 4:42 am

It’s me really realize that I should be contented in whatever God had given me..thanks a lot for this story it really enlightened me..

77. Sufia Khan — June 29, 2012 at 1:31 am

Interesting!!!!!!!!

78. Nikhat — July 3, 2012 at 11:20 am

Really! Why don’t we understand the value of what we have but always want those things which are not suitable for us; and can’t even understand the hints of almighty.

79. Haseena Taj — July 7, 2012 at 12:28 am

Nice lesson from this story. Don’t make surgical operation, the face will be destroyed.

80. mounica — July 8, 2012 at 9:37 am

It is a fantastic one. Don’t expect more than what you are! The moral is awesome.

81. Hamza — July 9, 2012 at 6:56 am

Heart touching

82. Najeeb khan — July 10, 2012 at 11:20 pm

Nice one, good lesson to greedy people in the world!

83. NARESH BHONSLEY — July 14, 2012 at 1:54 am

Jesus said be content with what I have given you.

84. Mehak Verma — August 20, 2012 at 6:32 am

Good story ….. written up beautifully……. :) :) :)

85. Gmork — August 29, 2012 at 8:19 pm

Nice story..but it brings the message that God is limiting our potential to achieve more (at least that’s what I see). I don’t claim to know a lot about God, but I do feel in my heart that He wants us to achieve more than what we have at the moment. I would rather say hold on to your desires, but align with God (whoever you perceive Him to be) to help you achieve them – according to His will.

86. SOURISH B. JANA — August 30, 2012 at 5:41 am

Good Story….Sometimes we ask for more to GOD by thinking that we must need something extra, but GOD knows which is required exactly to all of us…..

87. Don benjamin — September 4, 2012 at 4:09 pm

I appreciate what I am, I am a reason of God creation of me.

88. Chardy — October 15, 2012 at 8:22 am

What God gave is the most important :) you must be proud of yourself.

89. Divine — October 22, 2012 at 12:44 am

Inspiring story… it makes me realized how perfect I am… I just need to develop of what I have now… Thank you LORD your the best ever… luv U

90. DANIEL — October 24, 2012 at 2:47 pm

Wonderful!!!

91. Arun — November 2, 2012 at 12:51 pm

Great story with a beautiful moral.

92. Sanjana Kukreja — November 7, 2012 at 10:11 am

This story is too meaningful……..everyone should read it. I just loved it.

93. Ram — November 20, 2012 at 2:02 am

A Simple Story with a great Moral lession …….

Sometimes it is good to be Normal than trying representing yourself as a Supernormal and ultimately ending being an Abnormal or a Paranormal…..

94. Dania — November 20, 2012 at 9:52 am

Inspiring story.

95. Shashi — November 26, 2012 at 3:00 am

A good story with a good moral.

Always be happy with what yourself. Never greed for more which puts you in a situation in which you don’t want to be . .

96. Mosopefoluwa — November 27, 2012 at 5:37 pm

Unique we are.

97. Vijay — December 6, 2012 at 3:49 am

Always hope & dream big…

I don’t agree with this story….

98. Eliza — December 17, 2012 at 9:27 am

An inspiring story to tell; For sure I am fearfully & wonderfully made. I should appreciate the way God created me. Thank you.

99. Githui — December 18, 2012 at 4:54 am

Wonderful story to encourage us that we should appreciate the way God has created us.

100. Maryam — December 25, 2012 at 9:53 am

Carve your prayers before you let it fall, every human is the only one in his kind and can be sacred. We shouldn’t forget beauty is only skin deep, something is more immortal, is beauty in manner. Thanks a lot.

101. Revanth — January 22, 2013 at 9:19 am

The narration of the story is good.
Every body has their own skills, one becomes perfect only if he recognises himself.
Never expect for higher things which doesn’t suit us.
Live a happy life with the one that we have.

102. Naik — January 25, 2013 at 1:51 am

Want stories about thinking, imagination, hard work…

103. Shahana — January 27, 2013 at 5:21 am

Nice story..we will thank to God what we have..!!

104. Rochelle — February 8, 2013 at 9:28 pm

I really love the story. It makes me realized that we have to be contented in everything that we have.

105. Lovely Anne — February 10, 2013 at 7:06 am

Wonderful story :)

Thank you for this story .. I can now have my piece for the incoming story telling contest on our school ! HAHA .

106. Ashfaq — February 23, 2013 at 11:56 am

Very good story, what we have is enough, and should be satisfied.

107. Monica — February 28, 2013 at 7:40 pm

I loved it, it has a great moral.

108. Sara — March 17, 2013 at 2:04 pm

It was just an awesome story.

109. Priya — March 25, 2013 at 11:09 am

Nice!!!

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